For some rape dialogue, I think its powerful in telling her what she is going to be doing.
“I’m going to enjoy it, when you squealing with pain when I get to impale you on my shaft.”
Obviously it then becomes important to make that happen 🙂.
Alot of it also then happens to really be victim dependant.
Question or Mocking a married victim if you force pleasure on her, and question her about how many time you get to bring her to orgasm.
A naieve or innocent victim, letting her know exactly what you plan on doing to her.
Obviously, silently whispering in her ear, that secret that you are blackmailing her about, that will collapse her defenses.
“My Lady, you will do no such thing… It would be a shame if something happened to Sarah… …. Yes that Sarah…. your daughter. She is an adult now. Barley knows her true mother. Does the King know? Do the Prince know he has an elder sister?”